Another week has gone by, and it's that wonderful Horny Hump Day time again!
This week, for my selection, I've gone for something a little different, and a little closer to home. (Write from what you know, right!) I've chosen three sentences from my WIP, Jenna and the G-Man (although that working title is changing for the final product!)
By the time of this snippet, our hot and horny weather girl has been through a few emotionally transforming experiences, and is now upping the ante in her search for psycho-sexual satisfaction!. And what could be more experiential than a little date with a cat-o-nine-tails?!
Here we find our intrepid heroine hung up like a side of beef, assimilating a little pain-time with her whiplord gigolo!
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Having
understood her tormentor’s sense of keeping the lashes balanced, she knew that
the next set of lashes would wrap themselves around the top of her left thigh
and target the exposed edges of her cunt, and she smiled inwardly as her
prediction came true, her body jerking in response, the stings radiating
upward into the core of her flesh. Then
the lashes came frequent and fast – across her breasts to bite into the
sensitive skin of her armpits, around the back of her legs to sting around her
anus, across her back to wrap around and score her breasts and nipples, then down again between
her legs to harry her most sensitive flesh!
Always balanced, always meticulously placed to induce the most amount of
pain with the least amount of power – but then, it doesn’t take a lot of power
to make the cat-o-nine tails speak!
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It's so hard to select just three sentences from a scene of nearly 4000 words! I hope these are as stimulating for you to read as they were for me to write! Please leave a comment below to let me know what you thought of my selection, and don't forget to visit the other blogs at our Horny Hump Day hop!
Before I go - I'd just like to wish our fellow mistress of hot BDSM erotica, Jenna Jaxon, a wonderful birthday tomorrow! Have a great one, honey!
(For some reason, my FB thought it was today, so you'll be getting an odd message from me over there! LOL)
Until next week - stay HOT and HORNY, y'all!
Ashen
sounds painful, but then that's what it's all abt, right? great choice.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds painful and very sexy. She certainly is taking notes! Great description here, Ashen.
ReplyDeleteOuch! I know no pain, no gain, but...ouch! I find it fascinating that Jenna (giggle) is so analytical about this experience. Don't think I would be! Still she manages to make it seem sexy.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for the early B-day wishes, Ashen! They all work. :)
Wrapping correctly is an art form. You use it very effectively in this piece. Hot stuff!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the great feedback! It was very difficult to select just three sentences, which is maybe why Jenna seems so analytical. She certainly isn't by then end of the scene! :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe I should post a longer extract so you can see how the scenario develops?
Very meticulously-described scene! This Dom really knows what he's doing, a very good quality.
ReplyDeleteThe cat? He's using the cat-o-nine tails? OMG! Glad to see Jenna's enjoying it. Well done!
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